MIcah That was a painful story to read ... by "painful" I mean the grammar, syntax - everything. Looks like it was written by a budding reporter, and not a "seasoned" reporter!!
Doesn't anyone proof read/edit your stories before printing?
"Revellers in the carnival band that was making its way ..." - please rewrite this sentence!!
The last four paragraphs of this story are quite haphazard!! Second or even third rate reporting ....
MIcah
ReplyDeleteThat was a painful story to read ... by "painful" I mean the grammar, syntax - everything. Looks like it was written by a budding reporter, and not a "seasoned" reporter!!
Doesn't anyone proof read/edit your stories before printing?
"Revellers in the carnival band that was making its way ..." - please rewrite this sentence!!
The last four paragraphs of this story are quite haphazard!! Second or even third rate reporting ....
St.Lucia's carnival celebration is starting to resemble Brooklyn's Labour Parade.
ReplyDeleteWhat a shame.
ban that nasty bull shit call carnival
ReplyDeletemen and woman with animalistic desire like dogs in propagation season on the st.
Police killing again, in the back too.
ReplyDeleteThey deceased had been thieving?! Tragedy for the innocent bystander but just say no to crime!
ReplyDeleteA sad day.
ReplyDelete"ban that nasty bull shit call carnival
ReplyDeletemen and woman with animalistic desire like dogs in propagation season on the st."
ha ha
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To Police: shoot them all.