Thursday, July 19, 2012

Two Dead during Carnival Celebrations

7 comments:

armchair anonymous said...

MIcah
That was a painful story to read ... by "painful" I mean the grammar, syntax - everything. Looks like it was written by a budding reporter, and not a "seasoned" reporter!!

Doesn't anyone proof read/edit your stories before printing?

"Revellers in the carnival band that was making its way ..." - please rewrite this sentence!!

The last four paragraphs of this story are quite haphazard!! Second or even third rate reporting ....

Anonymous said...

St.Lucia's carnival celebration is starting to resemble Brooklyn's Labour Parade.
What a shame.

Anonymous said...

ban that nasty bull shit call carnival
men and woman with animalistic desire like dogs in propagation season on the st.

Anonymous said...

Police killing again, in the back too.

Anonymous said...

They deceased had been thieving?! Tragedy for the innocent bystander but just say no to crime!

Anonymous said...

A sad day.

Anonymous said...

"ban that nasty bull shit call carnival
men and woman with animalistic desire like dogs in propagation season on the st."

ha ha

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To Police: shoot them all.